SlateBelfur
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Post by SlateBelfur on Mar 29, 2017 11:43:47 GMT
Brazinly allocate stuffed bunny to strife specibus.
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darkgreenespeon
Pesky Urchin
Reading as many fanventures as possible
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Post by darkgreenespeon on Mar 30, 2017 19:50:46 GMT
I just got caught up with this! Seems really intriguing so far. I like the characters, though the humans seem pretty similar in personality (or maybe their quirks are. I don't know). Also what is even up with all the hairstyles. You should be careful about introducing too many characters too quickly, but other than that, this seems like an impressively well-made fanventure so far. Is it your first one? Also I'm really curious. I've thought about sburb players themed around games before, and I assumed they would be mind players. Is Dolci a Slyph of Mind?
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Post by Kaoxitium on Apr 10, 2017 5:42:25 GMT
This is technically my second fanventure, but the first was short, terrible, cancelled rather quickly, and is nearly five years old now. I am aware that everyone seems a bit same-y right now, and I'm gonna try to make them have more apparent distinct personalities in the future. also since they're all pretty obvious anyway - dolci is a sylph of mind, alita is a seer of time, and minna is a knight of space. the fourth character.... is a mystery and now, back to your regularly unscheduled update Minna: Pat your rabbit.
MITTENS isn't really fond of patting, but you're okay with that. He's a good bunny anyway.
Except when he chews through your laptop cable.
Minna: Retrieve arms.
You cannot retrieve your FIREARMS, because they are locked in this box! You locked your guns in this long ago, and have since lost the SPIROGRAPH KEY required to open it. Though you're still not sure whether or not that's a bad thing.
Minna: Find a box to put that bunny in.
You withdraw an EMPTY BOX from your SINGULARITY MODUS. This prototype modus developed by SKAIACORP takes all captchalogued items and compresses them into an EXTRADIMENSIONAL SPACE. While this does allow for INFINITE STORAGE, you can only withdraw a card if you remember that you've put it in there in the first place. Additionally, there are reports of it growing UNSTABLE if one captchalogues too many items of significant MASS. You've already got one INCREDIBLY LARGE item in there, and you're not too keen to find out what happens if it overloads.
Minna: Bunny. Box. Make it happen.
You gently place the bunny in the box.
Minna: Examine device.
This is your SYLLADROBE. It's a simple machine - you insert a card containing an outfit, then press the corresponding button to instantly switch to that outfit. This would probably be more handy if you didn't already have infinite storage, but it's quicker than pulling clothes out of another dimension.
Minna: Change outfits.
You equip the DRESS FOR SUCCESS.
This fancy outfit was a gift from your mother, given to you shortly after you CAME OUT. It's not really your COLOR, but you wear it when you have some SERIOUS BUSINESS to get done. And boy, do you have a lot of SERIOUS BUSINESS today. But you're probably going to fool around in your room a bit more first.
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Post by raisingchaos on Apr 10, 2017 5:51:08 GMT
> Imagine being a magical girl
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ten11
Gadabout Pipsqueak
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Apr 10, 2017 6:20:09 GMT
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Post by ten11 on Apr 10, 2017 6:20:09 GMT
>Examine large object in modus.
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Post by Mousemallow on Apr 14, 2017 10:59:35 GMT
>Begin Mittensquest.
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Post by Kaoxitium on Apr 15, 2017 23:01:52 GMT
Minna: Imagine being a magical girl.
You take a moment to imagine what life would be like if you possessed MAGICAL ABILITIES. Oh, what a life that'd be! To wield such incredible power, and look so cute doing it! To vanquish the forces of evil under a moonlit sky! To be headstrong and energetic, filled with self-confidence and never doubting yourself!
If only it were possible. But it's not.
You're interrupted from your daydreaming by the unmistakable sound of a PESTERCHUM NOTIFICATION. You're quite sure you set yourself to "offline" before going to sleep, but it seems someone wants to speak with you regardless.
Minna: Examine incoming message.
You should really get a chair one of these days.
A little weight lifts off your chest at the sight of DOLCI still being online. They made it in. You're pretty sure that if they were to die, you'd all be DOOMED. More than you already are, that is. ...You feel a little uneasy when you see who's pestering you, though. It's not that you don't LIKE them, it's just that they're a little DRAINING to speak to sometimes. You think you're going to pretend to be OFFLINE for a while longer. That doesn't make you a bad friend, right?
Minna: Open browser and go to mspaintadventures.com
A perfect distraction. You move Pesterchum out of the way so you can open GAIA.
You navigate over to the NEW and COOL ADVENTURE, VAST ERROR. This adventure's been receiving some mixed reviews thus far, most critics complaining about the LACK OF ORIGINALITY, but you don't really understand where they're coming from. The only thing that does weird you out a little is how everything kinda looks JUST LIKE BART. You're sure this is just a coincidence.
Minna: Examine door.
After reading a few pages, you take a break in order to examine the TRANSDOORTALIZER. This is one of many such doors in your house, all of which lead directly to SKAIACORP. This one was here long before this was converted into a BEDROOM, and you are ABSOLUTELY FORBIDDEN from entering it. Not that that's ever stopped you. The password changes a few times, but it's always easy to figure out. You guess that's what happens when your mother's so TRANSPARENT. You do have some business on the other side of that door, but you're not sure you should go through it just yet.
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Post by raisingchaos on Apr 16, 2017 4:56:20 GMT
> Captchalogue space-themed blanket from bed
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Apr 16, 2017 8:34:10 GMT
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Post by Ten 11 on Apr 16, 2017 8:34:10 GMT
>Limber up.
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Post by mousemalllow on Apr 19, 2017 3:50:21 GMT
>Remember you captchalogued your box key
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Post by TotalDude on May 3, 2017 1:35:05 GMT
Wear the cosmic sheet, become the Magical Girl
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Post by Kaoxitium on May 3, 2017 6:38:37 GMT
Minna: Retrieve bunny.
You re-arm yourself. With such a powerful weapon at your command, you're sure to overcome any hardships.
Minna: Examine ~ATH files.
Remembering that you might encounter this type of coding again soon, you return to your laptop to inspect your ~ATH files. You're not as proficient in TILDEATH as you are in DISASTERISK, but you do dabble in it a bit. This first file is a fairly rudimentary code. All it does is, upon the moment of your death, ensure that the one who orchestrated your demise swiftly meets the same fate. ...That's what it said in the guide, anyway. You actually have no idea if it works, but you still keep it running. Just in case.
On the other hand, you have ABSOLUTELY NO CLUE what this one does. You certainly didn't write this. Is it even syntactically viable? All those bifurcations and transfusions look a little out of your league. You didn't even download it - it just randomly appeared one day. Out of caution and common sense, you've never run it. ~ATH can be pretty destructive in the right hands.
Before you leave, you grab your PHONE. You're of the opinion that one should always carry around some form of computational device. Not more than one, though. Having multiple at once would just be silly.
Minna: Open door.
The last time the PASSWORD changed was a few days ago. Not that it was remotely difficult to figure out. Heck, this time it's your BIRTHDAY. How were you not supposed to find it out easily? You really question how smart your mother thinks you are sometimes.
Minna: Exit.
You enter the lab.
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Post by Kaoxitium on May 11, 2017 4:50:39 GMT
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Post by Kaoxitium on May 19, 2017 0:33:03 GMT
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Post by homeysomey on May 26, 2017 3:37:42 GMT
>Dolci: Be confused.
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Post by Kaoxitium on May 30, 2017 3:33:02 GMT
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Post by Kaoxitium on Jun 21, 2017 15:47:36 GMT
i'm too lazy to keep mirroring it here so from now on it'll just be links feel free to like, submit commands and stuff here still
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Post by Kaoxitium on Jun 23, 2017 9:23:20 GMT
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Post by Kaoxitium on Jul 18, 2017 5:39:56 GMT
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Post by anonymous croω on Jul 22, 2017 9:45:30 GMT
May I enter three commands? > : Remember who you are. > : What woke you up? > Pants: Remember that when you were a kitten, your pants were too big for you, so Dolci would pull them up to your shoulders, trapping your front legs inside. The last command is a reference to the Pantskat meme. Pants the cat, Pantskat. By the way, this fanventure is really interesting! It does seem to be generic at first, but it quickly proves to be different to the vast majority of Sburb adventures. But it actually had me interested since the title panel, with the strange diagram of the signs. Or maybe it was the promise of birds in the description.
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Post by Kaoxitium on Jul 26, 2017 18:23:05 GMT
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Post by anon on Aug 16, 2017 13:46:51 GMT
> Alita: Pester Minna.
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Post by Kaoxitium on Sept 25, 2017 1:30:30 GMT
wow only took me two months
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ten11
Gadabout Pipsqueak
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Post by ten11 on Oct 5, 2017 3:00:25 GMT
>Alita: Contact DA
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Post by anon on Nov 23, 2017 11:51:47 GMT
Aw...! I was actually really interested in this, I checked quite often. It wasn't very long yet, but it had LOTS of potential! But I'm not trying to guilt trip you into continuing or anything lol. If you don't want to keep doing it for whatever reason, then I think you should just do whatever you think is best. But if it's possible, could you please release the character names and their signs, and their species please? I've spent a long time staring at the symbol in the first page trying to work out what it means. Thanks so much!
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