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Post by Marimarine on Jul 12, 2016 17:10:56 GMT
Welcome to triworld- A mixel adventure!
To play this, first, you have to create a basic character bio. Here's mine:
Name: Flixxy Species: Glowkie Special Power(s): Flight (Things will be added as the story progresses.
Now all we need is a character intro into this world.
I woke up with a startle. When i woke up, i saw that i wasn't in the glowkie caves anymore. I was in this grassland that was very desolate, except for a few plowers. I didn't know how i got here, all i remembered was that in the middle of my sleep, the ground suddenly got softer. There were so many things to do here, even though it's super desolate. Let's just hope i don't die.
That's it! let's begin exploring!
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Post by SpottedBlades on Jul 12, 2016 23:31:05 GMT
That's quite short... Don't you want to add a quick summary of what Mixels are? It could interest people who aren't familiar with this franchise. You'd need to show different races, powers, and why you have chosen Mixels rather than ghosts or Chima animals. Why you think it would be a good idea, other than originality. Expand on this world. No one can play if they don't know where they are or what their surroundings look like. You talk about exploring, but what is to be explored?
Those are only some of the tips I can give. I'd like to join, but as I said, I didn't keep up with the latest Lego franchises.
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Post by Marimarine on Jul 12, 2016 23:38:34 GMT
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Post by Marimarine on Jul 13, 2016 0:04:08 GMT
I decided to explore my surroundings.
Like i said before, it was desolate with only a few plowers. But as i kept walking, i found a cave, where i heard rushing water inside of it. before i kept on walking, i spotted something in the corner of my eye. When i walked over to it, it turned out to be...
A strange, soggy map.
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Post by Marimarine on Jul 13, 2016 0:13:47 GMT
Also, here's an explanation of that other stuff:
The reason there aren't many species yet is because... um, well, i'm lazy.
And the reason there aren't that much powers yet is that your character will discover more powers along the way, and that one, single power is a starting power.
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