You have a really good story going here, and I quite like it. However, you really need to get someone to read through these updates before you post them. Aside from the typos which there are a few, a good chunk of the writing is very abstruse and I find myself having to read some sentences over and over before I understand what they're supposed to mean.
We mention typos on the Discord and Austin jumps right on them. As for the abstruseness of the comic, I think I like it that way (although learning to read quirks always takes me time), but I can see why the tone/style of writing may put you off.
really, there is definitely some abstrusive natured themes in the entire comic. in fact (at the very least for one character, UK) that's kind of supposed to be the point. i don't want to immediately say its exactly a "commentary" because anything that's bad, even for fun is normally still bad even if it tips into the good catagory.
but how many times in the source material were you kind of left scratching your head at a few of the explanations that weren't quite to being explained yet? it's a pretty common theme, or at least it should be in this kind of material. its a part of the big joke revolving around UK as a character.
though let it be known i am an on the spot and sporadic writer with a pretty bizarro way of speaking even casually. like you read this. you can kind of see where it's coming from.