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Post by austinado on Dec 30, 2016 8:06:03 GMT
Vast Error is a fantroll adventure set around Homestuck concepts and its fan content. Updates try to be about once or twice a week since 12/18/16. -- Tumblr -- MSPFA -- Discord -- (Click the MSPFA to read from the beginning.)
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Post by austinado on Dec 30, 2016 9:03:52 GMT
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Post by hellnickell on Dec 30, 2016 15:50:46 GMT
This seems cool.
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Post by austinado on Jan 1, 2017 7:42:19 GMT
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Post by austinado on Jan 7, 2017 1:56:19 GMT
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sylandrophol
Plucky Tot
fear me mudblood capitalist infidels, for i hunger for some KID CUISINE
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Post by sylandrophol on Jan 13, 2017 2:20:50 GMT
vast error is my fanventure waifu
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Post by austinado on Jan 19, 2017 8:50:11 GMT
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Post by austinado on Jan 27, 2017 6:14:04 GMT
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Post by austinado on Jan 30, 2017 8:40:42 GMT
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Post by austinado on Feb 4, 2017 6:19:37 GMT
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Post by austinado on Feb 20, 2017 2:30:31 GMT
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Post by austinado on Feb 26, 2017 7:37:28 GMT
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Post by austinado on Mar 1, 2017 9:59:41 GMT
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Post by thenacho on Mar 2, 2017 6:54:31 GMT
You have a really good story going here, and I quite like it. However, you really need to get someone to read through these updates before you post them. Aside from the typos which there are a few, a good chunk of the writing is very abstruse and I find myself having to read some sentences over and over before I understand what they're supposed to mean.
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phantos
Moppet of Destiny
『HARD TIMES』
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Post by phantos on Mar 3, 2017 0:36:30 GMT
We mention typos on the Discord and Austin jumps right on them. As for the abstruseness of the comic, I think I like it that way (although learning to read quirks always takes me time), but I can see why the tone/style of writing may put you off.
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Post by austinado on Mar 3, 2017 3:17:00 GMT
really, there is definitely some abstrusive natured themes in the entire comic. in fact (at the very least for one character, UK) that's kind of supposed to be the point. i don't want to immediately say its exactly a "commentary" because anything that's bad, even for fun is normally still bad even if it tips into the good catagory.
but how many times in the source material were you kind of left scratching your head at a few of the explanations that weren't quite to being explained yet? it's a pretty common theme, or at least it should be in this kind of material. its a part of the big joke revolving around UK as a character.
though let it be known i am an on the spot and sporadic writer with a pretty bizarro way of speaking even casually. like you read this. you can kind of see where it's coming from.
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Post by austinado on Mar 10, 2017 9:30:33 GMT
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Post by austinado on Mar 18, 2017 10:02:10 GMT
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Post by austinado on Apr 26, 2017 19:51:14 GMT
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Post by austinado on May 27, 2017 0:10:48 GMT
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Post by austinado on Jul 8, 2017 2:39:08 GMT
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Post by austinado on Aug 7, 2017 9:55:54 GMT
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