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Post by automatedTimeshift on May 22, 2016 1:57:35 GMT
AUTHOR'S NOTE: The mirror is where errors are fixed and some pages will be exclusive, so it's prioritized over the forum version. As a result, it's highly recommended you view it on the MSPFA Mirror instead.
MIRROR
A young boy- who was nothing but a victim of extreme and unlikely circumstance, lay face down on the floor, with a nasty wound on the back of his head. How long has he been laying here? Mere minutes. How long has he been unconscious? Far longer than you would believe. Did he ask for this? Absolutely not. Did he want this? No, of course he didn't... Did he need this?... Perhaps so... But how did this happen?... And why was fate so seemingly cruel to him? Those are both very excellent queries. Like most tales, however, they are for another time. For now, let us instead delve deep into his inner psyche, where there is a glimmer of consciousness.
Boy: ... Nngh... Boy: Wh... Where am I?... Everything feels so... Groggy... Boy: Urf... My head hurts so bad... (): I suppose it would, considering what my colleagues have done to you.
Boy: What...? Your colleagues? Boy: Who are you...?! Where am I...? Did you take me here? (): In answer to each respective question: My name is unimportant at the moment, just know that I'm someone you can trust, because you need my help as much as I need yours. (): You are not awake and conscious, but you are not sleeping either. You are technically dreaming in my consciousness- which I brought you to. Boy: I'm... In a lucid dream, but also in your mind? (): Yes and no. You'll understand in due time, but for right now you are in need of my assistance. (): You are, in a ways, at war with yourself. And currently, 'you' are losing. Boy: I... I don't understand... Ow. My head hurts even worse now. (): As stated before, all will be explained in the future. (): In the meantime, I believe you must win this war with yourself before you can be of any use. (): Do me a favor and close your eyes. Boy: What? (): Sh... Just trust me.
Boy: Okay... Boy: ... (): ... (): Do you feel that? A cleansing sensation in your head? Boy: I do... It's very... relaxing. And rejuvenating in a ways. Boy: I think... I think my headache is going away. (): Not the effect intended, but positive news nevertheless. Boy: Wait, what are you doing then? (): Do not fret... I am not doing any harm to you. Boy: I mean, it's not like I don't trust you but... Gah... I-it feels like warm water is building up in my head. Boy: It's soothing, but- (): Sh... I almost done... Endure it just a bit further... (): And...
Boy: GAAAH!! Boy: Ha... Haa... Hoo... Boy: Oh wow... Wow! Boy: My headache's gone, and I don't feel tired anymore! (): Yes. Well, I will need that sort of energy out of you if you're going to assist me. Boy: You want me to...
Boy: Now wait a minute- (): We may not even have a minute to spare. Boy: Er... Well I know you need help, a-and you helped me and all... Boy: However, I don't even know you! We just met. I mean, I'm thankful that you did... Whatever it was you did. Boy: But I don't know your name... (): ... Boy: Well are you going to tell me your name?... Or... (): I have a better inquiry.
(): Do you know your name? Boy: What kind of question is that? (): After all of the stuff that's happened to you, I'd be surprised if you remembered that much. I'd prefer your memories intact, but... Boy: Alright, sounds fair I guess. Now what was my name again...?
Heyo!! Guess what's back for a SECOND reboot after the MSPA Forums (the place I originally hosted it on) died? Yeah I still have the assets of the old one, but it would be a pain to put re-write EVERY piece of dialogue onto the mirror (which I never did in the first place) as well as organize all of the pictures and redraw whatever I didn't like into better pieces. Plus sprites are much more flexible to work with when it comes to gifs. (AND the app I was using on my phone to make the assets took up so much space. I saved them in app so when I deleted the app... Poof.) NOW I decided to save the sprites online as I go so I don't lose a thing. I figured since I was going to remake the art, I may as well reboot the whole story since now I've fleshed out a few ideas for it and possibly made a better storyline than before. So with that, LET'S GET THIS SHOW ON THE ROAD.
UPDATE: Reconstruction has begun!
UPDATE X2: Image migration to Miroware has begun!
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Post by charcoalTorture on May 22, 2016 15:43:18 GMT
> Blue Freckles
> Adam Newt
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Post by Nero on May 22, 2016 16:47:43 GMT
>Frisk
>Plonk
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Post by automatedTimeshift on May 23, 2016 15:41:42 GMT
> Blue Freckles > Adam Newt Ah yes, classic Homestuck style joke names followed by actual names. Despite Rudolph the Red Nose Reindeer being a thing, having a name that involves a color followed by a facial feature is not suitable for a human. As for Adam Newt... You get the strangest feeling that this wouldn't do as a name, so it is unfortunately dismissed. Try again.Despite your that you may or may not have, you get the feeling that this name is going to make your life a living hell. Besides, you feel you're more of a Perseverance kind of person.Okay now this is just getting ridiculous. What kind of parent names their child “plonk?”And of course, upon realizing how bizarre a parent would have to be in order to give such a name to their child, you try to imagine what your parents are like for comparison... Only to draw a blank. You try to remember your fondest memory... But nothing. It only now just dawns on you that you were trying to come up with a name for yourself. Which can only mean...
Boy: I can't remember my name... Or anything for that matter. (???): Oh dear... that is very troubling indeed. You have my sympathies, for what it's worth. Boy: I know I should be freaking out right now, but I can't help but feel... Unusually calm. (???): My colleagues may have done more damage than I thought. (???): I was afraid of this. Boy: What am I going to do? I have no memory of anything, so if I have a home then I'm not sure where it is. Boy: I might even have to go back to school to relearn some things. Boy: ...Can I even go to public school still? I don't even remember how old I am. (???): 6,371 Human Earth Solar/lunar cycles.
Boy: ... Come again? (???): You are roughly 6,371 Human Earth Solar/Lunar cycles. Which I believe estimates at close to 171/2 human years. Boy: ... How do you- Boy: Wait, don't tell me... 'I will understand in time.' (???): I was about to resort to 'you would not believe my theory if I had told you,' but in a ways that may work equally as well. (???): This may seem very confusing to you, but I promise that all of it will be explained. Much much later.
(???): In the meantime, I think we should address something important: Giving you a name. (???): Should you wish, I shall do so for you. Boy: I have a feeling that I most likely don't have a choice, so I'll go with yes. Boy: Quick question though. What's with the glowing hand? (???): Oh nothing too special, I just thought you would find it cool. (???): And now... your new name is...
Michael(?): ... Michael Riley? (???): Do you not like it? Michael(?): No it's not that. Just... why ‘Michael Riley?’ It sounds so... oddly specific. (???): I have been doing research on human beliefs, and your human religions interested me. (???): Most notably 'The New Testament.' 'Michael' refers to the archangel that lead a holy army against the forces of a great evil. Which may or may not be symbolic for something later. (???): While 'Riley' refers to the human phrase 'Living the Life of Riley' in reference to a happy, carefree and hard work free life. Mainly since I have taken note of your laziness. Michael(?): If... you insist? I guess I'll take it. (???): Good! That's one problem solved.
(???): Now comes the fun part. (???): I realize you are very confused, and unaware of your current happenings, but I assure you that you are safe for the time being. (???): Aside from any questions from earlier, I will be happy to answer any inquiries you may have. So... (???): Do you have any questions?
Author's note: Hoo whee. That was a doozy. 1: I apologize for being so text heavy and having this be so confusing, but I'm trying to parody the complex/convoluted plots of other types of stories like Metal Gear Solid, Final Fantasy, heck, even Homestuck. 2: Most of the characters already have names being brought over from the FIRST time I tried this, so sorry if it gives you the illusion of choice. The rest of it won't be entirely like that I promise. 3: The mirror will have less shenanigans.
Sorry folks. ^^'
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Post by sarahthehomestuck on May 23, 2016 16:04:36 GMT
>You never told me your name.
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Post by Nero on May 23, 2016 18:23:18 GMT
>Are you plonk?
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Post by Rucorous on May 23, 2016 18:30:11 GMT
>Kiss me >Will you marry me?
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Post by Neptz on May 23, 2016 18:59:15 GMT
>Fucking ask the shitfuck in front of you to talk like a normal human being and not like some kind of entitled shit alien god
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Post by automatedTimeshift on May 23, 2016 20:01:46 GMT
>You never told me your name. Michael: Well you still haven't told me your name for one thing. (???): And for good reason. However, if you're so inclined, you may refer to me as- Michael: Plonk? (???): If... You wish? (???): Though I would very much prefer you address to me as 'F.' Michael: F? F: It's the first letter of my true name. One you will not get to know for a while.
>Kiss me >Will you marry me? Michael: So you're the type to skip names, huh? F: ... I beg pardon? Michael: Well since we're all alone inside of your head, we technically can do whatever we want, riiiiiiiight?~ Michael: And to my knowledge, I've never kissed a girl before. Not to mention you're a cute looking alien girl.~ Michael: I bet you've never kissed a human before, huh? Wanna give it a try?~F: Uh... You do realize that I lack lips, even in a subconscious where anything can happen, right? Michael: Wait, seriously? I thought that was just you silhouetting yourself. F: No, it's how I am naturally. No mouth. No lips. F: I can eat anyways however. F: Now please back away, you are violating my personal space and it is making me uncomfortable.
Michael: Alright alright. F: My apologies, it just irritates me whenever people are not mindful of my personal boundaries. Michael: It's fine get it. Personal space and whatever. Michael: It's not because I was creepy, right? F: You are the most non- creepy thing I have ever met. F: Now if you will, I have a request of you.
>Flipping ask the sheepfluff in front of you to talk like a normal human being and not like some kind of entitled ship alien god
Michael: Okay, but could you please stop that? F: Erm... Cease what? Michael: The way you're speaking. It's kind of getting on my nerves. F: You are... irritated at my articulation? Are you still aggravated that I refused your advances?
Michael: No it's not that. I'm over that. It's just... Michael: At first I thought it was kind of cool, like... you were a wise sage or something. Michael: But now you just remind me of an uppity princess. F: Um... Humorous story about that actually. F: But before that, my request. Michael: Well if you do decide to tell it, please talk normally. F: ... Suuuuure? F: Though I am unsure if we have enough time for this. You may wake up during a crucial part.
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Post by Nero on May 23, 2016 20:05:43 GMT
>You're still doing it. I regret hitting on you. >What is happening here?
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Post by sarahthehomestuck on May 23, 2016 20:13:18 GMT
>Tell the story.
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2016 21:03:58 GMT
>Tell her to tell the story without sounding so entitled about it
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Post by Spira-Virgo on May 24, 2016 4:10:23 GMT
> F, let's get back to business before you lose the conscious link
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Post by automatedTimeshift on May 24, 2016 18:35:07 GMT
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Post by sarahthehomestuck on May 24, 2016 19:03:13 GMT
>big brother?
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Post by Neptz on May 24, 2016 19:09:25 GMT
>You don't remember this girl. Clearly, she has a big brother fetish.
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Post by Spira-Virgo on May 25, 2016 2:59:03 GMT
> Pretend to know her, Like F said, play along. Perhaps you should say: "Hello Little Sister, I am sorry, I was just over sleeping I guess".
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2016 5:38:53 GMT
>Look around and see if you recognize the place you're currently in
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Post by automatedTimeshift on May 25, 2016 20:39:49 GMT
>You don't remember this girl. Well you DEFINITELY DON'T remember her, but at least she's a new and possibly friendly face. Maybe this girl, your 'sister' knows what's going on, and can fill you in? Also, what's with her eyes? They seem... strange. Especially the sclera. Then again it may be best not to question everything when you already have more than enough to be confused about. For now, maybe we should start this off on the right foot by rendering yourself in a more symbolic manner for familiarity. There we go. Now for the fun part. Michael: Uh... Who are you? (???): You honestly don't know? I just told you that I'm your sister! (???): Did you hit your head on something so hard that it messed with your brain? Or did you get that head wound some other way? Michael: Head wound? What do you-Michael: Ow. Oop... Nevermind. I feel it. Oh boy do I feel it. (???): Are you okay? You're acting a bit... weird. Michael: (No stranger than the girl claiming to be my sister.) Michael: I'm fine. Just got to get my bearings straight... Michael: Waaaaaaaah........ Wow. Michael: Note to self... never try to get up quickly when you feel dizzy... argh. (???): Are you sure you're okay? You don't need help or anything? (???): It's okay to swallow your pride. Michael: No no no........ It's fine. I've got it.
Michael: Ha! Did it! Michael: Still dizzy, but I did it. (???): Well color me surprised. You’re more determined than I thought. (???): Still, don't push yourself. I'll be here to help if you need me, okay?
> Pretend to know her, Like F said, play along. Perhaps you should say: "Hello Little Sister, I am sorry, I was just over sleeping I guess".
(???): What were you doing anyways? Don't you know you're not supposed to go to sleep with a head wound? (???): What were you doing on the floor anyway? Michael: (I guess I must have passed out... That's the only explanation I can think of.) Michael: Sorry. I got tired, and I guess I overslept? (???): So you went to sleep on the floor? You really are weird. Michael: (I could think of someone much weirder... and creepier.) Michael: Yes, yes I’m weird. Michael: (Where the heck am I?)
>Look around and see if you recognize the place you're currently in
Michael: (And in this corner... a chest at the foot of a large bed, a poster for... a band I'm guessing. A sidetable next to a dresser, and... That's probably the closet door.) Michael: (I guess this is my room. Or -our- room? Do I share this room with my 'sister'? The bed looks big enough for two.) Michael: (Oh god please don't tell me I sleep in the same bed as my sister that sounds so weird and I don't even know her. Or at least, I THINK I don't...)
>Clearly, she has a big brother fetish.
(???): Whatcha lookin' at? Michael: (OH JEEBUS.) Michael: I uh... Was just looking around my room. (???): Our room? Michael: Yes our room! Our uh, shared room! Michael: Mostly the bed and... uh... how good it looks to sleep on right now. Michael: In fact, I have an idea. How about I stay here and get leftovers later?
(???): Heheh.... You're adorable. Michael: Uh... (???): Don't think I don't know what you're trying to do, mister.~ (???): You're trying to avoid meeting the rest of our family so you can spend more time with me. You're such a nice person. (???): Don't worry, you and I will have plenty of time to play games and do other fun things.~ Michael: I...
(???): Besides! Don’t you want to have a proper first meal? Michael: Uh... Sure? (???): Then follow me downstairs to the kitchen. (???): Mom's making turkey tonight. And let me tell you it is delicious.~ You don’t want to miss this.
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Post by Neptz on May 25, 2016 22:34:13 GMT
>Wait, when do we moan when eating food?
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Post by charcoalTorture on May 26, 2016 1:51:29 GMT
> Take a look in that chest before going to get food.
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Post by Spira-Virgo on May 26, 2016 3:17:46 GMT
>Wait, when do we moan when eating food? Well there was Food Wars manga/anime thing with food, so I think some people moan from good food... > Let's go and eat some good food! Considerably who is making said food... Let it not be weird creepy sister...
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Post by Deleted on May 26, 2016 4:01:16 GMT
>You're bleeding, fix that head wound!
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Post by Curris on May 26, 2016 6:29:51 GMT
Welcome back Timeshift!
Michael --> Yes, actually. Food sounds excellent. You'll need your strength up to recover from your wound, and as a bonus, being well fed is a huge boost to willpower, for whatever task "F" needs you to do.
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Post by sarahthehomestuck on May 26, 2016 17:20:23 GMT
>Food glorious food go eat.
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