Post by fabioman3 on Apr 19, 2017 0:58:46 GMT
Moving this to the right place
The original thread should be deleted
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Hello!
Some weeks ago i started a fanadventure in MSPFA called Alternative Alternia, its a fanadventure with no images for its most (yes, an adventure with no images on MSPFA, i pretty much knew from the start that this would make it way harder for people to enjoy it, but i got 8 favs, its not a lot by any means, but it makes me happy that 8 people liked it
) and if anyone would like to read it and share opinions, suggestions or critizize anything, it would make me very happy
The whole plan for this fanadventure happened when one day i had some free time (more than normal) and decided to make some fantrolls for fun, i made 3 of them, they were named Anarki, Napedi and Ostium. A friend of mine said that the characters were pretty interesting and that i should do something with them. I thought for a while and decided that a fanadventure on MSPFA would be perfect! Even with no images, i still decided to put this idea to test and created the "Alternative Alternia" fanadventure. This friend of mine helps me a lot with the fanadventure, he helped create some characters, gives ideas and he writes the fight scenes
Well, but i am losing the point here. I came here to say that it would be very appreciated if anyone told me what you think about it, like, what is being done right (hope its a lot of things) and what is being done wrong (I KNOW its a lot of things, but i am trying to fix as i go on), share opinions and give me advice in how to write it better and make it be a better adventure in general. Thanks a lot for anyone who read all of this and for anyone who decides to help me. Goodbye
Update:
Adventure Link: mspfanventures.com/?s=19439
The original thread should be deleted
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Hello!
Some weeks ago i started a fanadventure in MSPFA called Alternative Alternia, its a fanadventure with no images for its most (yes, an adventure with no images on MSPFA, i pretty much knew from the start that this would make it way harder for people to enjoy it, but i got 8 favs, its not a lot by any means, but it makes me happy that 8 people liked it
) and if anyone would like to read it and share opinions, suggestions or critizize anything, it would make me very happyThe whole plan for this fanadventure happened when one day i had some free time (more than normal) and decided to make some fantrolls for fun, i made 3 of them, they were named Anarki, Napedi and Ostium. A friend of mine said that the characters were pretty interesting and that i should do something with them. I thought for a while and decided that a fanadventure on MSPFA would be perfect! Even with no images, i still decided to put this idea to test and created the "Alternative Alternia" fanadventure. This friend of mine helps me a lot with the fanadventure, he helped create some characters, gives ideas and he writes the fight scenes
Well, but i am losing the point here. I came here to say that it would be very appreciated if anyone told me what you think about it, like, what is being done right (hope its a lot of things) and what is being done wrong (I KNOW its a lot of things, but i am trying to fix as i go on), share opinions and give me advice in how to write it better and make it be a better adventure in general. Thanks a lot for anyone who read all of this and for anyone who decides to help me. Goodbye
Update:
Adventure Link: mspfanventures.com/?s=19439