Well thats pretty rude. Why would you expect to get suggestions? This is the Fan Projects board, not the Forum Adventure board. Did you see the big READ ME BEFORE CREATING A THREAD notice? The one that specifies you shouldn't start a thread here if it takes suggestions? Moreover, what kind of start is this? Who is Mike? Why are they on their computer? You can't start a story with utterly no background information given, unless its an ontological mystery, and even those still have "you dont know who/where you are". You need narration, otherwise this single panel is basically meaningless.
I am currently reading every adventure on the MSPFA. No joke, every last one, starting with the first. And then writing recommendations for the ones i like. Check it out >here<